Lenten Sonnet #1

Forget "Sonnet Saturday." I think for this Lenten season, I am going to post a sonnet on here every day. So here it goes.


My sonnet is based on Shakespeare's Sonnet 19. I'll post his sonnet here for reference:


Sonnet 19


Devouring Time, blunt thou the lion's paws,
And make the earth devour her own sweet brood;
Pluck the keen teeth from the fierce tiger's jaws,
And burn the long-lived phoenix in her blood;
Make glad and sorry seasons as thou fleets,
And do whate'er thou wilt, swift-footed Time,
To the wide world and all her fading sweets;
But I forbid thee one most heinous crime:
O, carve not with thy hours my love's fair brow,
Nor draw no lines there with thine antique pen;
Him in thy course untainted do allow
For beauty's pattern to succeeding men.
Yet, do thy worst, old Time: despite thy wrong,
My love shall in my verse ever live young.


Now here mine goes...

A Timely Destruction (3/9/10)

As time will take its deathly toll on life

And make the flowers shrivel in the sun,

Then will it kill with its destructive knife

And force life’s fragile thread to be undone;

While friends walk by and we depart from home,

It runs along and hurries for its nest;

The sword, it stabs as we are soft as foam,

And time delivers dark and dreary rest;

But how will I remember you and me?

Will we be given love’s untimely end?

The trap of time’s nonstop eternity,

We shall escape and time we will contend.

If time will take its charted course above,

Then we will fight with letters of our love.


Have a great day and live life!